Tug (revision)

by Insert Pen Name Here
originally published at 07:21PM on Monday, September 24, 2007

Tug, tug
A tug on my skirt
What’s Beauty?
Love?
Happy?
Good?
I smile and explain with good cheer
and great joy
what these things mean in our world.

Another tug… uncertain this time…
What’s Ugly?
Hate?
Sadness?
Bad?
Sighing, I sit, and prepare to tell
that beauty, love, happy, and good,
are not the only thing in our world.

Prequels

Sequels

Comments

  • from Insert Pen Name Here :

    ok, heres a revision of tug; what do you think?

  • from Kermitgorf:

    Coulda just edited the 1st one didn’t need a whole new ficlet. Needs more revison, sorry, last line I think you meant in our world not out. just saying..