Even the Voices Have left Me

by Kermitgorf
originally published at 11:52PM on Monday, October 01, 2007

It was dark, I felt claustrophobic. The last thing I remember is the voices in my head, telling me to kill my sister Lolly.

I Remember picking up the ax, wielding it over her head and slamming it down. Kill her ,the voices insisted.

The ax separated us forever, blood poured out of the sides of both our heads, where we had been conjoined for twenty two years.

The pain was excruciating.

Then I passed out.

But where was I now ?

So dark. My head resting upon a soft…a pillow.. OH NOO it can’t be!!

I was free from Lolly.
I can’t..breath.. I’m so alone, even the voices have left me.

They buried me ALIVE !!!

But I am Not dead!!

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Comments

  • from artistsrunwild:

    creepy

    i always get SOOO freaked out by people being buried alive

    i watched this episode of Lost once where they were paralyzed and so they got buried alive…..FRREEEAAAAKKKKYYYYY

    im seriously freaked out now…aaaahhh

  • from ItsNotEasy_BeingGreen:

    ergh, i blame you if i can’t sleep tonight.

  • from Kiarra:

    dang, she messed herself up

  • from THX 0477:

    Very freaky combo of command hallucinations, conjoined twins, fratrecide (spelling?), AND being buried alive. Sort of seems like cheating to put in so many different freaky things, don’t you think? Just kidding.

  • from A Clockwork Apple:

    That awesome. Very creative.

  • from YodaOnCrack:

    What a great opener – nicely done!

  • from Kermitgorf:

    youse gotta read Voices- the 1st part of this.

  • from Lone Writer:

    OMGOMGOMG
    I am sooo going to have nightmares!
    JK! That really freaked me out though.

  • from Kermitgorf:

    Cool the intent was to give nightmares, so glad to have achieved that.

  • from Lone Writer:

    OOh. You’re mean…
    :)

  • from Kermitgorf:

    I’m trying to win a challenge here LOL !!