{Gumshoe Challenge} What a Doll

by Sue London
originally published at 12:17AM on Sunday, October 28, 2007

Lara dropped a stack of papers on her boss’s desk and quirked her blonde eyebrow at him. “Gotten any further on the Cobs case yet, Mr. Michaels?” Her voice sounded like satin sheets and champagne on a dark night.

Jack Michaels mumbled something and held up a finger while scratching notes in his journal. Without looking up he said, “Hey, Doll, how about a drink?”

Lara was already setting the tumblers down. “Way ahead of you, Michaels.” She poured the Scotch and settled on the edge of his desk while she took a sip. He gave her a wry smile.

Lara Hanegan had walked into his office last year and asked for the job of secretary. He had explained that he couldn’t afford one and she had said he didn’t need to pay her. It had taken a month for him to get past her blonde bombshell looks and figure out why she wanted to work for a down on his luck gumshoe. What she hid behind that high society veneer was a mind and instincts sharper than any cops. And he was the only one who had ever given her the chance to use them.




  • from Laine the Grey:

    Eh, I liked the first half, but I felt that you should have put part two in another ficlet.

  • from Sue London:

    Thanks for the note. That was interesting because I wrote half of it, couldn’t figure out where to go, and saved it for awhile. I came back today and decided to just finish it as best I could.