Running {OTOC challenge}

by .:band baby:.
originally published at 11:18AM on Saturday, November 03, 2007

Lucy? But she seemed so sweet. Oviously, it was a mistake. She must not have seen Cotton. But then why did Joe take off like that?

This was too much for me to comprehend. I ran to my room and wept untill I couldn’t cry anymore. I lay in my bed all night, unable to sleep.

In the morning, I went running. It felt good. The crisp air cleared my head of all thoughts for the time being. I ran without thinking or feeling, and ended up in the one place I didn’t want to be. I checked my watch, it was 8 a.m. Someone should be up right?

I let my breathing return to normal. Slowly, I walked up to the house. I rang the door bell. Lucy answered, her eyes red. Looks like she’s been crying.




  • from someday_93:

    Poor Lucy…if it was me I’d feel awful. Just one thing, though - in the second paragraph, maybe “layed” should be “lay”? I dunno, just a thought. Great sequel!

  • from someday_93:

    dang strike through! sorry…

  • from .:band baby:.:

    yeah, it should be ‘lay’ thanks =) now we have to wait till Kermitgorf writes.

  • from someday_93:

    Yes, we shall have to wait…I hate having to be patient…=)

  • from One Time, One Chance:

    aw lucy! tht’d reallly suck to run over your brother’s girlfriend’s dog… =[
    KERMIT !!!!!!!

  • from Kermitgorf:

    Confrontation the next in the Cee Cee,Joe saga.
    i like how you made Cee Cee, in the 1st person, go over to the house to find the truth.