Winter Formal

by butterflygirl6106
originally published at 06:32PM on Monday, November 12, 2007

Winter had sat in and the most of any night the wind and air had a chill. It was the week of winter formal and I had not got the nerve up to ask Sean to go with me. What will I do if he says he is going with someone else? I be darned if I will go with my cousin william. I was on my way to school the next morning and I came across sally, she was my best friend. Hey Laura, hey sally, “Laura have you ask Sean yet to the dance?” know, why? “well I heard he was going to ask Lilly today. That cow her ankles are look like bed post. heeeee, sally laughed. Well you better do something today, you have first period with him right? yeah, well ask him then. See ya at lunch time. ok! Laura ran lines through her mind as she tryed to figure out how to ask Sean to the dance. Oh silly just ask him he want bite. There he is slow down, don’t look desperate, play it cool… thats right cool now. Hello Sean could I see you for a moment. Sure! whats up? nothing I was wondering if you had a date for winter formal? well I don’t, but




  • from One Time, One Chance:

    this is an awesome story..
    ..but u may want to place the “quotation marks” in where each person is speaking, and break the lines up so it’s easier to read.
    but anywhoways, i really like this! awesome job!