On A Snowy Evening

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by T.F. Torrey
originally published at 06:28AM on Monday, January 07, 2008

It took us ten minutes to get the car out of the snowy ditch, but suddenly it rolled free. I didn’t know where this mystery girl had come from, but surely she had saved me. I turned to thank her, but she was gone. Squinting in the light of the full moon, I saw the tracks of her narrow boots in the snow, headed off down an overgrown driveway toward a farmhouse I had not noticed before.

Clearly she had wanted to leave without making a scene, but I had to thank her for helping me.

An old woman met me at the door. I smiled. “A young woman helped me get my car out of the ditch tonight,” I said. “Do you have a daughter?”

The old woman shook her head, but as she did I spotted a picture on the wall in the room behind her.

“That’s her,” I said. “That’s the girl who helped me. Who is she?”

“That’s my daughter,” the woman said, “but she couldn’t have helped you.”

I frowned.

“Her car went off the road at the foot of the driveway in a snowstorm.” The old woman’s eyes blazed. “She’s been dead twenty years.”

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Comments

  • from uselessness:

    Very well written! I think I’ve heard this before, or something like it. Is this an adaptation of a popular ghost story or am I just crazy? :-)
    LoA

  • from Metaphoric Spurs:

    Haunting, just like the eerie glow of the photo you chose.

  • from T.F. Torrey:

    Thanks for the nice comments. Yes, this is an adaptation of an old ghost story, now in the form of a ficlet. A secret about the photos of my “inspiration”: I usually write the ficlet first, then find a picture to go with it. (Shh! Don’t tell the judges!)