Dude, Where's My Car? Oh, That's Right, My Psycho Girlfriend Has It

by Stovohobo
originally published at 04:07PM on Tuesday, January 22, 2008

The girl huffed in frustration as her regular phone rang, interrupting the conversation on the first one. The first phone that only had one private line.

“Okay, mom, I’m coming.” She hung up and returned it back to its secret pocket inside her jacket, then flipped open the second phone.

“Hello?” she growled through gritted teeth, hands white-knuckled on the Jeep’s steering wheel, jostling around as the vehicle rumbled through the dense foliage.

“What—what are you doing?” Haley’s voice crackled through the receiver, full of frustrated bewilderment and bordering craze.

“I can’t explain,” she yelled back. “It’s complicated!”

A few lost, dry breaths on the other end, as if he was trying to find words. She took a breath.

“Haley, listen to me. My name’s not Violet Williams. It’s Winter Shields, and I’m an agent-in-training for the criminal organization Lá Pretni. My mom’s a top agent there, and she’s been trying to get to your dad. Interpol, right?”

”...Um.”

“Yeah, um.”

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Comments

  • from .:band baby:.:

    wow. Both of these were good. I seriously was not expecting this from the title! Nice job.
    LoA

  • from Storykeeper of Fae:

    Whoa! That was a shocker! I just thought she was a cheater. So she really does love him? Well that’s good. I like it!

    LoA

  • from Kermitgorf:

    Intrigue, plot twist, awesome LoA

  • from Lone Writer:

    LOL !
    The plot thickens…

  • from One Time, One Chance:

    you come up with the most strangest names.
    Violet Williams?
    Winter Shields?
    hahaha.

  • from ♠Ana Cristina♥:

    I love how Violet Williams sounds as though it were her true name and Winter Shields makes more sense as the false name, but it’s reversed…just one of the clever things that makes this story work. Keep it going!

  • from THX 0477:

    Lovely cadence to it all, a real sense of urgency. Must admit I wasn’t sure what’s going on. Is Haley the person to whom the Jeep belongs? I suppose I should read on to find out.

    LoA

  • from N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja :

    oh my gosh I really hate the title, just to let you kno. Its so dumb, it makes me chuckle, literally.

  • from N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja :

    THE GUYS NAME IS HALEY ? THAT IS A PRETTY GURLY NAME .