Spiraling out of Control

by Apple
originally published at 01:09AM on Monday, March 24, 2008

“What?” I asked in shock.

“I was getting breakfast this morning and when I walked into the cafe, she was there with Mendez. She looked like she was having a pretty good time too, they were laughing like crazy when I left.”

My head started spinning.

“And as much as I hate to be the bearer of bad news, they kept whispering back and forth to each other, and after everything he said to her, she’d start blushing and giggling.”

Did I say spinning? More like spiraling out of control. And now it’s collapsing in on me. oh crap I thought right before i hit the ground.




  • from uselessness:

    Nicely done. I’ve continued the plot…

  • from thebetweenspace:

    I like it. I can totally see that melodramatic Jordan losing consciousness. lol

  • from thebetweenspace:

    Although brief, I feel like Apple’s contribution to the series was nicely exexuted and apropos.

  • from Aditi Broota:

    not so sure about the collapsing part, but everything else makes perfect sense. good addition to a great series!