The Unbelievable Apology [Apology Challenge]

by NightMaiden
originally published at 07:02AM on Thursday, April 24, 2008

I know you probably won’t believe what I’m about to say, or more probably, write, but I’m going to do it anyway.

I’m sorry.

It’s as simple as that. You can cry and scream and beg, but I’m not taking it back. I know you don’t think I could ever say it, but here I am, saying the infamous ‘S’ word.

I’m sorry.

Yes, it’s true. I apologize.

I’m sorry.

And you’d better accept it.




  • from thebetweenspace:

    That last line is so threatening… and ominous.

  • from THX 0477:

    Yep, I definitely got a threatening vibe off of that one. Great set up and finish.

  • from someday_93:

    me too…like, you better accept it…OR ELSE …something like that.

  • from One Time, One Chance:

    i love how it’s all friendly and apologetic..
    ..until the end. where it’s like “I’ma kill yeww!”

  • from ♠Ana Cristina♥:

    I like it, even if it doesn’t start with the line “This is just to say …” My only problem with it is that it feels kind of incomplete. Like there’s more that needs to be said. Of course, maybe that was your intent, so I don’t know.

  • from NightMaiden:

    Thank you for all the wonderful comments! I tried to leave you hanging…maybe visualize what could possibly make someone say that. Sorry if I didn’t clarify like some people wanted. I’m pleased with this Ficlet, though. .

  • from NightMaiden:

    I’m sorry! I didn’t know that the Ficlet was supposed to start with “This is just to say”. * smacks forehead * That’s what rushing gets you…