Clyde Corrigan

by Seth Miller
originally published at 10:20AM on Friday, May 09, 2008

April Joyce was compelling.
She compelled him to act.
No matter how irrationally.
He knew all the details except for one: how he’d ever succeed.

The prop coughed a hacking flam fire, belching soot-gray smoke from the piston engine. Clyde Corrigan cocked an eyebrow at the thought of piloting the old lady today. He’d be lucky to make the trip in one piece, let alone leave the ground alive.

The gray morning fog, smell of leather and the hopelessness of winning her heart kept him distracted from the potentially fatal pre-flight checks. Forgetting as he always did that the chill of her stares could ice his wings in mid-flight.

A few gauge-checks and switch-flips in, the first shots gnat-whizzed by, sharpening his mind but not his wit.

“Fuck off!”

Competing against the engine he continued, “I’m for Ireland!”

“Long Beach, Cali,” he corrected, making his lurching arc skyward. She wouldn’t hear him anyway.

If she ever loved him before or thought she could in the future, she’d have to start with forgiveness.

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Comments

  • from Will Hindmarch:

    The details in here are great. The momentum is great. The clarity is, uh, less good. I’m a little confused by the action here. It reads like you’ve done a lot of cutting to make it fit. I love me lovelorn pilots, though.

  • from John Perkins:

    I agree with Will. The language is superb, but I’m left confused as to what exactly is going on. A fun read though.

  • from Rusty Tanton:

    I’ll be looking for an excuse to drop the phrase “hacking flam fire” into casual conversation. Nice.

    I was able to follow it okay on my second read after I read the Wikipedia entry about Corrigan you linked to on your blog, but it was a little confusing the first time.