Hello Teeth

by Phil Sporlan
originally published at 11:43PM on Friday, May 23, 2008

Very Dark, too dark. Is this it? I’m I going to die?
“Did anyone see you come here?”

Did I make a mistake? Did he not know who I was? I should of had some coffee. I better answer or it’ll be lights out for me.

“I was very careful, no one saw me.”

Finally lights, a giant set of teeth stand befor me. I liked it better with the lights off. The man begins to open the package, I usually don’t get to see this part. His large pant size is blocking the goods, it’s probably better I don’t see what’s in the package.

“You did very well, I want to give you something, you’ll have to come up to my room to get it.” He smiles.

I think I might be in one of those dammed if I do dammed if I don’t situations.


  • from Punkin:

    I really like this sequel. It keeps the story moving along at a fast and interesting pace.