Real Killers Do Real Things.(The Murder Of Jonathon Butcha Chapter 2)

by Mighty-Joe Young
originally published at 01:30AM on Wednesday, June 25, 2008 mature

Booking took ages; time that only a veteran of the D.M.V could identify with.
A lifetime in booking ended in a less than cordial ten man cell that housed fifteen.
“G white(that is what all the black inmates called the white prisoners in Orleans Parish Prison) get out from in front of the T.V.”
I turned around in the only place in the cell that didn’t house a cramped prisoner either playing cards, sleeping or reading the bible.
“Yo G white it’s your minute a fame ye’ hurd may.”
“At 6 o’clock a New Orleans male escort named Wallace Marvel was arrested in the french quarter for the Murder of local disk jockey Jonathon Butcha.” The lady reported.
“Damn You was set up Playa!”
“No i Kilt em!”
“Damn G white is Gangsta! Ya Hurd May.”
“Sir i am not unsociable but i have been in holding for 3 days, because i just committed my first murder. Please don’t take offense but get your black ass outta my new bunk.”
He had to be humiliated when a cosmopolitan fag kicked him till he passed out,then took his bunk.

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Comments

  • from Apostrophe :

    cool story.. sorry i don’t have any bobble heads to confer with.

  • from thebetweenspace:

    So what we have on our hands is a real tough guy, a little bit cranky, but definitely a tough guy.

  • from ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫:

    I’m likinig this alot !! Very fresh!
    Nothing like a good “Oz” story! :)

  • from THX 0477:

    Title alone needs a ‘mature’ tag, buddy. Let’s keep it PG for the kiddies.

  • from John Perkins:

    “G white?” Never heard that. When I was in jail, us honkeys were referred to as “woods,” a shortened version of “peckerwoods.”
    You’ve definitely got some flair when it comes to telling a story, but I think the writing itself needs to be cleaned up a little (cleaned up as in grammar and flow, not the cursing).

  • from RainDance:

    wow. Not what i expected, but I like it.

  • from RainDance:

    I’m a little confused about the last sentence, who does “he” refer to? Because it was written in first person so maybe its just a mistake.

  • from Mighty-Joe Young:

    Oh that was refering to the guy he had kicked in the face until passed out and then gave up his bunk. Which i know by experience is the only way to get a bunk in southside H.O.D in O.P.P. Where they keep the capitol offenders and escape artists.

  • from ♠Ana Cristina♥:

    Whoa with the title, Trifalmadorian. Even if you wrote shizznit, or some such variation, it would be better. I don’t want them making you pull it down because it’s a neat read otherwise.