the ways he comes

by LiSteN2MeE11
originally published at 09:28PM on Friday, June 01, 2007

He came out to me with his bloody lips and fangs the size of me- his face scary covered with humen flesh and he wore the bones of his victums. He came for me with one strike and there went all my hopes and dreams. I cryed out then saw the darkness which lies beneth my sins. As I sit in wait for Him to come and get me out of this dreaded dark place. When will he come I dont have one clue but i do know the monster still is lercking, somewhere….




  • from horrorfan13:

    I like it, but watch the punctuation. This seemed a little rushed. Maybe you were going for a certain feel. I’m not sure.