A Beautiful Lie

by Bartimaeus
originally published at 02:21PM on Tuesday, July 15, 2008

By throwing that all away, by flat out lying to me, you killed me.
Why am I still here, you ask? Simply because I want you to see what you’ve started.
Look around you, for once in your self-centered life. Look your friends in the eyes for once, as if you care.
They’re hurt... So this isn’t just ‘about me’, and I’m not trying to ‘make a scene’.

All I’m doing is trying to make you see what damage you’ve done. Not only to me, but to my friends... some of which you don’t even know. Hatred, anguish and malice could have been avoided, if that’s what you’d wanted.
I don’t know whether you’re the reason for my pain and regret… but I do know that you could have saved everyone a lot of trouble if you had actually cared about someone other than yourself for once in your life…

Outrageous? Please… even the people you call your best friends are talking about you behind your back… about your selfishiness. So, I’m doing all of them a favor in telling you what a two-faced sucubus you are…




  • from .:band baby:.:

    oooh. this is really good. I like how he’s almost having a conversation but we can’t see her side of it! Wonder what she did??

  • from Lone Writer:

    Interesting Scene. I wonder what she did also.

  • from moonlight_girl :

    that was really good and yea i wonder what she did

  • from Just another writer:

    amazing as always =) and if this is what i think this is about, then i dont need to ask “wonder what she did” like everyone else…hehe i feel special =)