Some Playful Banter and a Deal.

by Bartimaeus
originally published at 10:38PM on Tuesday, July 15, 2008

I sighed, having been pushed enough toward my breaking point as it was. But no, he simply had to demand more, to get as much out of me as possible. Yet, there was something mysteriously attractive about it all… I quickly snapped back to my train of thought.

Why me?! Why couldn’t he have chosen some random unsatisfied blue-eyed floozy? But he chose me, a well to do, God-loving Christian who is in fact NOT A NUN !!!

Then I thought of what he said, after I’d kissed him.

More like ate his face…

I nearly gasped at my own train of thought, and he seemed to notice.
“So, you willing to give me something?” he asked, licking his upper lip just enough for me to see.
I scoffed at him.
“What kind of woman do you think I am?
His eyes widened suddenly.
“Hey, hey! Calm down there, I was just having some fun.”
I sighed and shook my head.
“What do you want?”
He smiled secretively, and caught me with his blue eyes for a second or two.
“I want to come with you.”

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Comments

  • from AwkwardlyReversed:

    haha i like this guy

  • from ♠Ana Cristina♥:

    I like her inner struggle here and he’s definitely managed to turn the tables on her!

  • from Just another writer:

    “more like ate his face” hahahah XD i like it

  • from Eckhouse:

    Their chemistry is warming up. Tienes un sequel.

  • from THX 0477:

    Great back and forth and downright electric chemistry going on here. The first paragraph does a great job of spelling out her tenuous thought process.

  • from Mistress Elsha Hawk:

    Yes, the first paragraph was fabulous! And the smarmy guy is going to get into trouble, I can feel it!

  • from Lone Writer:

    He has a bit of a
    “I’m not sure if he’s a psychopathic stalker or not”
    type feel. If you know what I mean.
    LoA

  • from g2 (la pianista irlandesa):

    I don’t want to admit it, but I like this guy! He’s got nerve!
    ...But he chose me, a well to do, God-loving Christian who is in fact NOT A NUN !!!” I love this line, absolutely priceless!
    (And, to Eckhouse, don’t you mean tengo? because you said “you have a sequel”...)

  • from g2 (la pianista irlandesa):

    I don’t want to admit it, but I like this guy! He’s got nerve!
    ...But he chose me, a well to do, God-loving Christian who is in fact NOT A NUN !!!” I love this line, absolutely priceless!

  • from Bartimaeus:

    lol thanks X) and for g2: Eckhouse was correct in his conjugation of the spanish verb tener. you in spanish is tu, and the tu form of tener is indeed tienes.