Pull the trigger!

by Mask By The Moon
originally published at 04:38PM on Saturday, June 16, 2007 mature

“My death is not your business. Stay the fuck away from my funeral!” I screamed. I was livid. I didn’t even face him.

He was my ex boyfriend. He wouldn’t save me, but tried to console me by telling me he’d be at my funeral. Some other guy had a gun to my head. I was waiting for him to pull the trigger. I just wanted it to end. Wait… why wouldn’t he pull the trigger?

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Comments

  • from Mask By The Moon:

    Marked mature for language

  • from YodaOnCrack:

    There’s something to be said for “intensity”, which this has… If you write a sequel, make it a bit more descriptive so we’ve got the whole context painted clearly. Intensity in an opening is what I truly like, and this has it.

  • from Mask By The Moon:

    No sequels planned, just a little venting I needed to do. Sorry. Everyone needs to do it at some point.