by pianoman
originally published at 03:51PM on Sunday, September 21, 2008

I say angels. You think beautiful, celestial beings. Huh, hate to brake it you, but, contrary to popular believe, angels are butt ugly. In their defense whenever you see one you fall to your knees, you cant help it, everyone dose it, read the bible. You feel this incredible happy feeling. You cant seam to pull your eyes away from them. Your brain, observing you reactions, thinks to itself,”O, they must be beautiful!”
As I entered the angels campsite. They all looked up from roasting there marshmellows around the fire. (I know angels and marshmellows. wierd combo, but apparently they came up with ‘em. No wonder they taste heavenly. O, ha ha). I fell to my knees.(couldn’t help it.) I felt a wonderful feeling. I couldn’t keep my eyes off them.
“Devil sends his blessings.” I said as i stroke a match and lit the fuse of dynamite that encircled my torso. “He accepts God’s challen-BAM.




  • from pianoman:

    hey i wrote this idk if you would consider it mature. if you do and i offended you i apologize

  • from Freedom:

    Its not really offensive but I suggest you break stuff up into litte paragraphs.
    [Sorry, I ALWAYS comment like crazy :]

  • from Punkin:

    i like how you made the angels ugly. quite a twist on things i must say.

    there are a few spelling glitches (but i do those too.) and i think brake should be break?

    Overall nice work.