I Love Them

by pianoman
originally published at 09:54PM on Monday, September 22, 2008

I love my clouds. Any type will do. Long tube clouds. Puff clouds againts a robin-egg’s blue backdrop. The clouds I hold nearest to my heart are my storm gray clouds. Their preciouse silver swirls pluming, growing, shrinking, moving always moving. They are constantly on the edge of quiet and storm. You can feel the almost the rain that will never come on your skin. You can see the almost lightning on the horizen almost dancing but never will. You can hear the almost thunder that will never sound. Mock clouds? Please! They are my clouds.




  • from pianoman:

    One time, One Chance may hate them but i love them. hmm…to each his own i guess :)

  • from Ezzie:

    I kinda agree with you. I mean, i can always feel some sort of electricity when those clouds are overhead.

  • from pianoman:

    thnk you

  • from THX 0477:

    Nice counterpoint, kind of playfully put across.

  • from One Time, One Chance:

    i love the line “Mock clouds? Please! They are my clouds.”
    this is a cool little contradictory (SP?) ficlet!
    thnks so much for the sequel!
    (and btw, i sequeled you=])