Controversial Challenge (Abortion)

by Raymond Finn
originally published at 06:40AM on Wednesday, November 26, 2008

As he hung up the image, the doctor gave her the bad news.
“It’s just here. Can you see it near the ovaries?”

“My life is over,” she muttered. She couldn’t believe that such a small group of cells would mean the end of everything.

“Not necessarily,” said the Doctor. “You got here in time. There are options.”

“What’s going to happen to me?”

“Well, it will continue to grow” said the Doctor. “It will double in size every two weeks or so. You’ll get frequently sick, if you haven’t started to already. Your body will be co-opted to serve its needs, to the detriment of your own.”

“Oh my god. Like some sort of parasite.”

He nodded. “Essentially, yes.”

He reached out to her and took her by the hand. “Obviously, given the circumstances, I’d recommend surgery to remove it immediately.”

“But I can’t, Doctor! It’s against my religion.” The girls tears came now.

He was confused. “This isn’t a baby. It’s a Teratoma. And if we don’t remove it, it will kill you.”

“I know,” she said “But I’m a Jehovah’s Witness.”

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Comments

  • from Wyatt Aapr:

    I agree with you on people adding comments. Amazing that 50 people can read your stuff and maybe you get only 2 or 3 comments. I thought this ficlet was well written. Good Job.

  • from SaveTheUnicorns:

    wow. one can totally relate to the girl’s pain and aprehension. this is amazing. great work conveying a message that arises much controversy.

  • from John Perkins:

    Ha ha. This is exactly the way I feel about babies. I never understood the allure of them, but I do recognize that at least a few people need to have them for us to survive as a species. Luckily there are plenty of people having more than enough of them to make up for my lack of contribution.
    Good job.

  • from Mistress Elsha Hawk:

    well, there’s always hospice…
    better get your affairs in order, tell your family you’d rather die…
    you could change to Christian Scientist, they have nurses, trained to pray you to healing…
    Awesome ficlet! I love the slow build up to the reveal :)

  • from Dreamt of Turquoise:

    wow,, this is great.. a very controversial subject.. and i completely agree with the doctor

  • from Oy:

    AHHH ! I just googled teratomas, and I wish I hadn’t! But great story!