Perfect Moments

by Beautiful Rain
originally published at 08:29PM on Tuesday, July 31, 2007

These are the moments when you feel perfection. It flows through your veins and fills your heart. You stop dead, inhale the green smelling air, enjoy the moist grass beneath bare feet, close your eyes for just one second, and acknowledge that the world can be everything you ever wanted. These are the moments that you feel perfection.




  • from Amarantine:

    Very detailed paragraph, simple and elegant and beautiful. Love it! =] !

  • from Saint Chuck:

    Beautifully written, it really captures what (I think) you’re trying to say.

  • from THX 0477:

    Sigh, you’re making me miss summer even more. Phooey on winter.

  • from Mistress Elsha Hawk:

    I agree with Amarantine, well done! A few of these strung together with characters and you’re on your way to a novel! Add some drama, and sell it! Great paragraph, it seems to have inspired a few.

  • from emma jo_234:

    beautiful, elegant.

  • from wytherwings:

    oh that’s beautiful