The Rebellion Against King Alquackromanhighmountaintopruler

by N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja
originally published at 07:25PM on Tuesday, September 11, 2007

Alquackromanhighmountaintopruler (Al for short) was the master. He controlled everything, from who was allowed to go to the bathroom to who was allowed to read. He sat atop his mighty throne on the top of mount Alquackasofogus (which he had named himself) protected by 5 ft. thick walls. Every few inches a guard armed with a submachine gun stood at the ready. Towers stood at each corner of the wall and stockades lined the bottom edges. The wall went down 6 ft into the ground so nobody good dig up into the fortress. Why, you ask all the security? Not many people liked Al. Most known qere his 16 brothers who would have been at the throne if Al hadn’t kicked them out. Also Al’s 691.5 (one of them was born with no legs)children weren’t very fond of him. They started a rebellion which was slowly growing beneath Al’s arrogant (and pointy) nose. The eldest brother Sackologs (Al’s parents only were fond of him) was the leader, a war hardened drill sargaent who would stop at nothing to kill Al. The war was on.

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Comments

  • from Fyora Cartagan:

    ... Wow.

    I don’t know what else to say. Just watch the spelling mistakes, perhaps add dialogue, flesh it out more. The idea is lovely and hilarious, though.

  • from Kiarra:

    ooh…sounds exciting

  • from Stovohobo:

    I like all the people that hate him, including the child with no legs. =) Though I agree a little with Fyora, I wouldn’t say it’s worth two stars. Nice idea, too.

  • from blueyedwonder:

    hmm…that’s…different…