wow you sequeled my story!!!

im glad you liked it enough to think it deserved continuation

i like this as well

very much so

i wasnt sure how i or anyone could continue that
but this was great

not sure about the ending
i am the destroyer wasnt really heading in that direction but it makes sense not the less

adds some good depth to the character

thanks!

and thus it continues

i have sequeled this

im very excited about this series

i think we can do wonders with it

but gosh did i set up a hard idea to sequel!!!!

I find it hard to do – i cant imagine the hard time YOU had doing it!!

but i think i have done myself and you justice

read and comment away

love the last three lines…and the finished-ness of it, like the narrator can’t control it…he just is a ghost, a shell, a destroyer, and there’s nothing he can do about it. VERY nice!

you use they a lot. they, like demons? voices in her head? regardless, im intrigued