Whoa! That’s really intense! Poor Josh! I hope he’ll be alright.

you can decide, if you sequel.

suck the life out of the peppiest puppy.

wow, that was intense. i wonder if Josh’ll get out..

Great start to a series (or setup to a series). I think your descriptions were topnotch and the man with who can suck the life out of the peppiest puppy is downright menacing.