Such a sweet story with sadness and yet joy in it, a hard complexity, but you made it work.

Very interesting. Different style for you, but I really like it.

ohhhh, reminds me of tying my shoes…okay, i get it now…haha. VERY nice job; love it!

I like it. I’m not quite sure why…

Very odd, but it’s starting to make something approaching sense.
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Plus, you put spaces in between the paragraphs.