Wow, I really like this. The way it starts, the nod to photographic memory, the ending. Really nice.

I adore this as well. I understand.

I feel like I understand what you’re saying, but maybe I don’t. I don’t like it when people say that to me.

Anyhow, regardless, it is beautiful. You paint such a great picture in my mind’s eye. I often wish I had a camera on me.

Bravo

This is really, really good. I love all the descriptions, and I really like what this ficlet is saying. Great job!

thank you so much for your feedback, i really appreciate it

wonderful glimpse into strangers lives. descriptive.