The scariest thing about this one is that it’s true. Based on
http://www.wired.com/politics/security/commentary/securitymatters/2007/10/securitymatters_1004
by Bruce Schneier

That’s deeply disturbing.

personification of viruses….and the whizzes behind them.

actually, no. No mention of the whizzes behind them, and no personification. Just a description of something that’s going on now, something really scary. It’s the next phase of virus, and it’s real (with minor liberties, I suppose).

Checked out the story yeah these things are scary. Your writing gives them personality viruses are alive. great job