awesome.

i did read all of them, just to let you know…

I think I like the last two the best, but I had a hard time following all of it. Maybe I’m just tired! I like the references to games; the contrast between innocent youth and a dangerous reality.

I love it hunny! Good job!!!!!!

whoa. Love this.

Ah it’s all so good. Childrens games crossed with violent reality. It’s so dark, the real Joker would be proud!

lol,
to make the real joker proud
yes, now all my childhood dreams have been realized!!

This piece i found to be amazing. Granted, all poetry is good when written with purpose, but this certainly exceeded “good.” I love the way you added in the children’s games with such an angst-ish [yes i just made up an adjective!] subject. Would you mind if i read this to my literary club? and is so, should i credit it to Blossom Ruoquen?[how do you pronounce that?]