All of the italicized lines are from Brandy (You’re a Fine Girl), written by Elliot Lurie. © Copyright 1971 & 1972 by Evie Music, Inc. and Spruce Run Music. Chappell & Co., Inc., publisher and administrator.

Here’s the YouTube link of Looking Glass performing the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oR0oHQxlzGs

Classic song, and a really excellent job using the lyrics woven in with just enough other text to make more of a story to go with the song.

Nice job! Never heard the song, but I like the story!

I’ve also never heard the song, but your story did a nice job of breathing life into those lyrics. I’m going to go hunt up the song now.

Great lyrics, great song, great story. (Although I may be biased, as this song was the inspiration for the character Brandy in my novel-in-progress, The Dancing Queen.)