Truly loverly, mate. Love that you tied it back to the previous ficlet serial (and for those that don’t know, the previous Blake and Simon adventure starts here: http://ficlets.com/stories/9935).

And the last line: priceless.

Chicago PD lol. Cool series!- guttural semetic soundiing comand.. great line.

Love where it’s going. I’d love to jump back in the pool and write a sequel, if nobody wants to…

Sorry, Ana Cristina, but you took too long to jump a sequel in there.

No one needs permission to continue the sequels of the story — just please make sure you know the previous installments and don’t contradict them (at least, you know, not too badly).

I don’t think any of us know where this is going, so you won’t mess it up for us; don’t worry, just do.

There you go Ana – the link posted above

read it everyone

READ IT !

And it was then that we realized that artistsrunwild had the true mind-control powers…

Very funny. I totally enjoyed it.