This was really good. I would change the punctuation in the last sentence, either by inserting a colon, like…
with the leaden weights of this world that had been holding her back: her pink slip, bank card, deed, and cash.
…or by letting those items, those “weights,” stand alone in a sentence fragment. This will make that last sentence much more powerful. Otherwise great writing.
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