hi, this is my very first ficlet, so be gentle and please write a “quel” so we can see just what happens to Josh and his friends…..

thanks,
Rowan

It’s good!

I wanna see what happens =D

I like the story and the sweet friendship between the characters. And certainly one heck of a pity party he has going on there. The format (no paragraphs and minimal spacing) really bog down the read, and you have several typos that’d be worth fixing with the ‘edit this story’ link above the text. Welcome to ficlets, and hope you keep writing.

LoA

I was inspired to sequel as I thought of what should happen next. :)

great characters, man Josh had a bad month.