O to be different

well written yet a good vampire story. still because of the one..two..three i couldnt help but think of the Count on Sesame Street.

very nice vampire story. and different.

Nicely written with good descriptions…

chortled is an exquisite word choice, If I could make any noise after being horribly mangled it would most definately be a chortle.

wooo.
this is radd.
and a sequell would bee even raddder-er

I don’t know much about vampire stories, but this is flippin sweet

I agree with Tad. Chuckle is being used by the masses and even my great grandmother says snicker. So, as I was imagining your story, a chortle was the only possible beginning for his reply.