So bizarre, so bizarre. I take it Big Ida is a woman? Not that I’m judging alternative lifestyles or anything. I’m fine with Ida being a man. Really, I am.

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Damn you, Pop Bottle Pete! Big Ida’s my woman! I mean, sure, there’s more than enough of her to go around, but I ain’t into sharing, if you know what I mean. Damn you…

This is the odd couple, for sure. Great ending.

wowzers, I sure wasn’t expecting that…

“Sorry ‘bout the booyank, Nick, but Big Ida’s in luv. I got me a ring now, suga’h. TWITA !”

No, Big Ida, no… [sob] [sniffle] [BANG!]

OMG

That is hysterically amazing! I love the dialog and the way you made them sound.
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Ha ha ha! What a bizarre and wonderful story. The characters are unique and have a memorable relationship. It’s a shame the title spoils the plot twist! It’s very well-written. I’ll give it honorable mention status, but only because there are so many great entries and I can’t place it any higher. Thanks for entering my challenge, Little Man! ;-)

This is awesome. :D I loved it. There’s no describing its greatness more than that.

Wow…that was…wow. Even with the title, once I got into reading the dialogue, I didn’t see it coming!

hahaha i got confused every here and there, but i think i got the jist of it and whew! didn’t see that ending!
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i couldn’t help humming Pop Bottles by Birdman feat. Lil’ Wayne in my head when seeing the title =]