Apart from a few spelling and capitalization errors, this is a great story! It starts out vague and a little confusing, then the twist comes and clears everything up. It caught me totally off-guard! I guiltily admit that it reminded me (just a little) of Bill & Ted’s Bogus Journey but of course your story is much more serious. I would have liked to explore the backstory a little more, to find out where Sam was going when he died, and so on. Thanks for entering my challenge!
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