interesting, I like the ideas, but I wasn’t sure of whether there was supposed to be a rythm to the words or not. If not it was fine, if so it was a little awkward and was a little inconsistent, otherwise I enjoyed this.

It doesnt have to ALL rhyme, Dreamer. Thats how mine are. But yeah…I like it non-the-less, Blah. LOVE YOU !!!! MISS YOU !!!!