he he, that is a sassful comment. Great rebuttal. (is sassful even a word? I always avoid the word ‘sassy’ even when I have to make up stuff). Anyway, you have a good voice and a strong sense for making your character’s personalities stick out and be different as they should be.

Ooo wow. You should read the first one.

love the cheekieness of Josh

I love how he talks correctly to the guards, but not to himself!

What a hilarious way to get around the whole don’t be overheard by the guards command in the prior entry. I love how he switches between dialects and makes the guards feel like idiots at the same time. Top notch!