i like the idea of being trapped by emotions instead of being physically trapped, but i could have used a little more serious of a struggle.

Jaja, yeah.
Actually this is a true story kind of thing.
And um, I’m a pretty boring person.
I don’t really know how to express my own emotions, so, yeah, I see what you mean.
That’s why I like to write. Because in the “real world” I have no smile, laugh, or tears. But on my paper I do.
Anyway I was trying how to express amusement, that’s how I felt during this whole dialog in my head. But um? Italics maybe? or bold??
Jajaja I dont know!

nice. It was retty good. I could feel the feelings and thoughts running through her mind. But it could have used a little more details and such.

Hmm, who used whom? I mean, he could have used her to get a quick fix, and she obviously went out with him and let him flirt with her, showing no restraint. It seems she went back to him to fill the gap her current boyfriend left behind. Very true of many “couples”, the break-up, the return, the fringe benefits. I think you’ve captured the thoughts well!