Inspired by Fight Club by Chuck Palahnuk, chapter 18.

I like it. The slowing time can be interpreted as just an author’s tool, or something unnatural actually occurring(which I made use of in my sequel). There’s a lot open for sequels, especially the Betty Smith bit, and it’s well-written, with the dialogue appropriate to the setting and characters.
Good show, mate!

Thank you! :D Reading your sequal now.

I really like this. I love the ‘no relief from crying’ bit.