hahaha! that is funny!

ha ha mcdonalds lol omg please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahh i screamed when i saw ur worte more omg i love ur stories!!!!!

Very well done emotion. Why don’t you use quotation marks instead of italics? ‘I’m supposed to bring you home’ does not end in a question mark. ‘He said’ ends with a period, not a semicolon. I only nitpick because I care.

i hate mcdonalds =p but whtevr, right? it don’t matter.=]