Oh my! A vampire? An angel? Something else?
This really catches a reader’s curiosity.

Ooh! You could catch the mysticism and magic in the air, stuff it in a jar, and light up that dark little room like it was day. Quite good.

LoA

I like where you’ve taken the story. I’m curious to read more!

Fascinating! Mysterious! She needs to prepare for him, I think. ;)