I’m totally enjoying this! The train can either be great or scary for someone who’s never been, and now she’s on her own! With no cell service! I think it would be fun if you showed the shifting demographics of passengers as she goes from station to station, from the college students and hipsters (did I actually write “hipsters?”) in the East Village, to the yuppies Midtown, on to the diverse neighborhoods of Queens! Looking forward to reading more…

you got my plan spot on.