ooh write more, please! i want to know what happens! please please!

kk, now that the begging is done: AMAZING . I want to know what happens. Nice “shocker” start. Has me gripped. keep going!

That was good ri9ght in the beggining it sweeps you in the story! Please do write more!

nice!! sequel pleasssseeeeeeeee! PLEASE , or I kill you! ( lol Achmed, You should watch that video.)

Ooh, quick pace and then a bit of ‘uh oh’ right there at the end. Great job taking the story in yet another direction.
LoA

Cool! I love this! I agree, write more!