Cool.
Only suggestion would be to use some line breaks to make it easier on your readers.

Wow. That’s really awesome. Great viewpoint and very original. 5 stars!

oops forgot to actually GIVE you the stars! silly me!

ok obviously i don’t know what i’m doing cause it showed up twice and i’m probably an idiot for commenting again but oh well. i really LOVED your story!

great dialogue! so sad and so true!

great dialogue! so sad and so true!

thanks :D