The imagery in this is really powerful, and startling at times. Wonderfully description-driven.
a little hope in a bleak, and gory, world. That is one contemplative seagull.
I love that opening line, how the cheeseburger wrapper “flutters angrily.” You have a very interesting juxtaposition of phrases and images that somehow manages to work. Great work.LoA
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Mistress Elsha Hawk
♠Ana Cristina♥