cool super secret agent type mayhem.
LoA

Nice touch with the knot in his back from the scuffle. And I really like the last line—very everyman turned hero sort of stuff.
LoA

Thanks! I was trying to finish up the chapter so we can get out of the parking lot and see what happens on the road. Who’s next?

HORRIBLE

Very enjoyable. I just loved that first paragraph.

I could not help myself, this story is such fun that I have added a sequel to this one

Thanks!! I’m glad someone continued the story!