Haha very clever. Have you ever heard the song Fairytale by Sara Bareilles? Haha this reminds me of it. Really good details, plot and twist. Definatly deserves five stars.

i like the twist of the story

“Her carriage was now definitely a pumpkin and pretty soon it would be pie.”
Best sentence of Wednesday, February 6th, 2008. Officially. Because I say so.

I have to agree with White hat, definitely best line of the day. I really liked the rest of the story too.