lol. i like it.

woohoo!
Nerds…
shakes head, smiles, and walks away slowly

omg, this rocks. :)

Hysterical! Wonderful work…I hope there’s more!!!

imaginative.. Wonderful.. so many wonderful candies…. sequels.. Pez and tootsie pops..3 musketeers… M&M peanuts..Lemon heads..almonds joys..

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha. deep breath this is hysterical! i love the way you incorporated all those yummy candies…mmmmmm…sorry i had a sudden craving…a sequel, purty peez!
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its cute how you worked with all the names of candy.. I like Kermits sequel too.. you two work well off eachothers stories..

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I love how you mixed in words like “nutcase,” “sucker,” and “sticky situation” that are not only common in detective capers but also, obviously, a nod to your sweet subject. Very nicely done.
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what a good “twix” to the story.

Awesome job on the challenge. Pun-tastic even!
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so i rounded up my Peeps
and
I scoffed at a couple of Airheads and some Laffy Taffys giggling as they passed.
and
We questioned a couple of Nerds who had witnessed the attack. I borrowed a pen from one of their pocket protectors and took notes.
my fav lines!
oh this was so entirely hilarious!!!

Very entertaining.

literally laugh out loud material. totally cute!
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This is very funny.