Hmm, very intriguing. It raises many possibilities. Did he commit a crime, or is he innocent? Is he being attacked by the townspeople? Where is he? Very open-ended for a sequel, but also enough to keep finished right here. Nice job.

wow.. what had he done? mysterious.. ambiguous.
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Good mystery, interesting to see what could be next.

Whoa there. What did he do??? SEQUEL !!!!
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I can’t wait to find out how he found himself in this situation. I also liked the dialect.

I’ve tried something with this. I’d like to see this go two directions (a fork?). I did guilty, now someone make him innocent!