Whoa. Intense. But good.
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whoa is right.. What suspicion??
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yeah i agree..what suspicion and this is really well written.

INTENSE . duuude. i haaavvee to keep going! ahhhh!!

I like the addition of some suspicion involved in the accident. The officer’s lines were kind of interesting: for instance, “We move move in a timely manner, ladies. Kindly come with me.â€?