Gasp! I don’t think his son would want to remember him like that! His son is probably going to be humilated now. And the poor father, I think the pressure has driven him mad. Really good story.

Wow. Definitely didn’t see that one coming. It’s sad that that was what he thought was the only way.

Good story.

Ooh, that was horrid but sadly close I think to what some of these homicidal sprees are about…being remembered, being known.

OMG ! Pen.up.girl is right, it is sad that he thought it was the only way.
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twist ending… not how a son wants to remember his dad. Unforgetable. Im sappy I was thinking this was a dad struggling to make ends meet in a dead end job, wanting his son to be proud.
Didn’t see the end coming either. Talented.
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If you didn’t see that coming, then the story worked out just how I wanted it to. :D

A skillful and ominous twist. You delve so well into the inner-workings of your character’s minds. I have long wondered how many ‘monsters’ are created by things like intolerably high expectations, either of parents or the person him/herself, and the feeling of being too ordinary or common. (Then again, most heroes emerge from the same circumstances… I’m thinking Johnny Cash for some reason when I say hero).